Taking Stock of My work

I am satisfied with my paper. I put alot into it, and i had alot of people proof read and give minor suggestions. I think i did pretty well with the detial in the essay; anymore would have been too much. I started the idea process for this essay by writting out a really long version by hand. From that i read and highlighted what i liked and thought i could use. After that i typed it up into the rough draft. From there i kept proof reading it to see what i could change and i also had about 4 friends read it and correct anything i missed. Finally i took all the suggestions and correction that were made and combine them into one final copy of the story.